Moderation 1.2

Please help me with this. Has he read too much? He has attempted a range of language features, but he has made LOADS of errors – too many to award Achieved? I’d really appreciate your advice here – thanks

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  1. Sandrine Ellis says:

    Definitely an A as enough accurate language for a year 11. but some hinderance in the delivery, pronunciation though as well as language errors. very staccato and strongly relying on notes but clear enough to me. I have emailed you more feedback.

  2. LornaS says:

    I agree, I think it is definitely A, but reliance on notes and errors would prevent from being anything more.

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