Category Archives: Moderation

Moderation 1.5

I am looking for a second opinion on this written work by a level 1 student. The sentences are very simple but the accuracy is high and there are opinions and reasons. I am split betweeen grades. Would love another opinion. Thanks https://thshb-my.sharepoint.com/:b:/g/personal/dfl_ths_school_nz/EX7IEjmUteBMkwS6kNbm2lMBYd55kGO1UqexE5_QiAuJMg?e=OLvD2T

Moderation 1.5

I am looking for a second opinion on this written work by a level 1 student. The sentences are very simple but the accuracy is high and there are opinions and reasons. I am split betweeen grades. Would love another opinion. Thanks https://thshb-my.sharepoint.com/:b:/g/personal/dfl_ths_school_nz/EX7IEjmUteBMkwS6kNbm2lMBYd55kGO1UqexE5_QiAuJMg?e=OLvD2T

Moderation 1.5

I would be grateful if someone could look over these two pieces for a student. I am split between the grades for them as one has significant error, but the other shows promise. I think that overall, it should be A because of the level of error in WP2, but there is development of ideas. […]

Moderation 3.5

Hi all, if anyone could look at this student’s writing I would be grateful. I am torn between NA and A: there are times when it is very evident that she has literally translated from Eng into French and so this leads to the obvious pitfalls. However, she does present ideas with explanations and facts. […]

Moderation 1.2

Finally, I think this would be a Merit, but due to a couple of inconsistencies, would this bring it down to A? https://drive.google.com/open?id=1Za94fwfk-g8zT8b9Eoxjcs4Lo3W_d_fc

Moderation 1.2

Another one that I would appreciate any help with please. https://drive.google.com/open?id=11Zlxwf3osDAnQ3Mzysinpa4lfavqVMrq

Moderation 1.2

I think that this is between M and E, please could anyone give me a little input? https://drive.google.com/open?id=1p_AZnW0sysr7vxe2MVO8l1aC_P3rUN2j Thanks

Moderation 1.2

Please help me with this. Has he read too much? He has attempted a range of language features, but he has made LOADS of errors – too many to award Achieved? I’d really appreciate your advice here – thanks https://drive.google.com/open?id=1i6OXtG5VMKNvcJNZhTN21ltki1NbcKvB

Moderation 2.2

Could you please check this presentation? I think Not Achieved as there are no language features present at Level 2. She has tried to use a conditional (she used the future “vous aimerez” and she’s used the imparfait where she should have used the future – Quand vous arriviez. Your thoughts please?

Moderation 3.2

Please could someone listen to this speech. The student has been on scholarship in Switzerland and consequently, her accent is heavily influenced. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_yFjlrfIURwY8_BhOBTpA9he9ExAGeUj/view?usp=sharing Merci

Moderation 3.2

Please could someone listen to this speech and check if it meets the requirements for excellence? The student is extremely conscientious and I would hate to have it downgraded for her. Merci

Moderation 2.5

Hi all If anyone could lend a hand in having a look over my 6 level 2 writing tasks, I would be most grateful. I am new to marking NCEA so any advice would be gratefully received. https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzIi8TfIN448UUp5SnJ2Q24xX1k Many thanks in advance

Moderation 1.5

Sorry colleagues, I think I posted the wrong folder yesterday in my haste to get this completed! If anyone has a few mins to look over a sample of my writing portfolios, I would be grateful. https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzIi8TfIN448V092dkNqcEIxRkU Many thanks

Moderation 1.5

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0BzIi8TfIN448b0Z5RnFOdWduNlU?usp=sharing I am new to marking NCEA level 1 work. I have included my comments in the folder. If anyone could kindly look over my comments and add in, I would be grateful of any advice. If anyone could look at just a sample of the work I would appreciate it. Many thanks.

Moderation 3.3

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B0H8gU-n3K72Y0NieW5uaGZoSFk/view?usp=sharing https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B0H8gU-n3K72dFVKQ05fLW1nQ2M/view?usp=sharing https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B0H8gU-n3K72MUpDUGRvX3RXVHM/view?usp=sharing Hi, I am new to teaching French and my moderator is away presently. I would be grateful for any and all help! Student A has long dark hair and is wearing a striped top in the book club clip. Student B starts the book club discussion and is sitting in the centre. […]

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Have these two girls done enough to achieve Excellence. How much emphasis is on their ability to sustain a conversation and how much on Level 8 structures and vocabulary? https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0Bxn1yZLZNZ8bS1dpcjVZOXZsbFE?usp=sharing

Moderation 1.2

I’m not sure if this can be a Merit. I always thought that there was a bit much reading, but my impression now is that if there is eye contact some of the time, it can still achieve. There may be a certain lack of fluency, but that may also be partly due to nerves. […]

Moderation 1.2

I’m not sure if this can be a Merit. I always thought that there was a bit much reading, but my impression now is that if there is eye contact some of the time, it can still achieve. There may be a certain lack of fluency, but that may also be partly due to nerves. […]

Moderation 2.5

Bonjour. I’d appreciate your advice on this one. What he’s saying is great but it’s how he says it. Mistakes like “mais nous savions que cela grave encore pour lui” and “Je devrais le bon rendre” definitely hinder understanding, but is this good enough for Merit?

Moderation 3.2

This is an oral presentation from a student who’s talking about school here from a young person’s viewpoint. I tend to think just an A, but I’m mindful that a moderator gave him M last year in Level 2 for what I thought was an A. Many thanks. Link is: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0BzMRWuNZ2JebVlNnMWdSWmZjRFk